The Factory

My grandfather worked at the factory in town.

He was the eldest of his siblings, so it was always understood that he would work there, as his father had before him. When his firstborn child was born, my uncle, the same was assumed for him.

The factory had operated in our town as long as anyone could remember. The lights always remained on and the smoke always poured out of the stacks. Not a person in our town could remember a day of clear sky: we had always lived beneath tendrils of grey smoke, reaching like ethereal tendrils towards the sky. On days where staff was limited and the smoke could not reach as high, it would seem to curve back down, searching for fuel. Work always returned to full production before they reached the town. Always.

The layout of the factory had likewise remained consistent. The top floor was where the stacks were maintained. Keeping them clean and clear was a full-time job for multiple people.

The next floor filtered debris from the stacks. Those that cleaned out the stacks threw the waste to waiting workers, who sifted what there was of value from it. Most ended up in the incinerator, but enough gems and precious minerals filtered up to make the job worth it.

The next floor fed things down a separate array of chutes. Things that other towns paid us to take away. Things wrapped in bags and carpets and sealed in rusting barrels that needed to never return. We did not question the contents. We did not question the regularity. The outside world would entrust us with their secrets, and in return they never questioned what we did with them. Silence was the reassuring truce between our town and world outside.

The bottom floor, the only subterranean floor of the building, was the school. It was assumed that any firstborn women in town would be assigned to work there. My grandfather always pitied them for it.  

My uncle started attending when he was five, as did all the firstborn children in the town. Every night, he was collected from home by the school attendants, and he was returned shortly after dawn, when the factory workers had already filed in. My grandfather only saw my uncle in passing in those years. As he finished his shift and left for home in the evening, he saw his son screaming as the school attendants carried him inside. When he returned for work in the morning, he would see his son being carried home to his mother, now silent, still and grey.

One day he did not pass his son. None of the workers entering that morning saw any of their children being taken home. There was one path to the factory, and no one had passed a single person leaving.

My grandfather was the first to venture downstairs to the school. The doors, which were locked from the outside by a rotation of attendants, remained bolted. He demanded the catatonic woman who curled beside her chair unlock them. She shook and repeated that the knocking had been wrong. It was wrong. Not their signal. Not their hands. Not the hands of the children. It was wrong.

He took the keys from her. He still has the scars on his forearms: marks showing where fingernails met bone.

He unlocked the doors and went in search of his firstborn son.

He does not tell the rest of this story. It is a story told in absence. There were no ambulances called. There was no cleaning or investigation. There were no survivors retrieved. Those who dug graves refilled them with empty coffin and decorated them with blank markers.

The bottom floor of the factory was filled in with concrete the next day. Deals were made with neighbouring towns for the supplies. They left even more assured of our town’s confidentiality, as no one in the town would speak of their reasons.

Over the following weeks, the factory was alight with activity at all hours. A new storey was added and the stacks were raised. The new school was the ground floor, atop a base never to be reopened. The factory is now completely above ground: four stories tall.

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Two Sentence Stories (part 21)


Peeling off the wallpaper had been so satisfying that Susan had been unable to stop, peeling the walls back to bare beams. Still not satisfied, she began picking at her calluses.


It shouldn’t have still been dark when his alarm went off, but when Michael looked out the window there was no light shining through. Only once he turned on the bedroom light did he see the shifting, smittering swarm of wings, legs and stingers pressed against the thin glass.


Dana had told her boyfriend that if he punched another hole in the wall, she would leave him. As she patched up the plaster, she reminded the bound figure on the other side that she never said she’d leave him for anyone to find.


Rational

Every calculation had been run, but there simply wasn’t enough food for the crew to survive the journey.

The first six months had gone smoothly. The spaceship had safely exited their solar system, and they were on track to reach the new planet in another year. Then the hull was breached by errant debris.

Decompression was immediate. The crew’s lives were saved by the security system, which immediately sealed off the damaged section – the same section that contained their supplies for the journey.

The 8 surviving crew members were each vital to the mission. While each wondered if they could have gotten by if one of them had been lost in the accident, not a one of them could now be allowed to starve.

The botanist kept at work, growing as much food as they could, but it wouldn’t be enough for everyone. Either all would starve slowly, or they would need to supplement.

Not a member of the crew will say to this day which of them first suggested that they look to “other supplies”,but in time their precious cargo, vital for the colonisation of the new planet, became a necessary sacrifice.

80% of the cargo survived the journey. 20% had to be vented out to prevent illness and disease.

The official report listed a “failure with the refrigeration system”, but if inspected, not one of the sleeping pods were faulty.

Connected

The stranger bumping into her side barely caught Lana’s attention. She was in her own word, listening to music over Bluetooth earphones.

“Disconnected”

The music had stopped. She felt for her phone, wondering if the battery has died. It wasn’t there.

Then she remembered the person who has bumped into her left side. The same side as her handbag, the front pocket of which had been holding her phone.

Lana looked around, but couldn’t see anyone suspicious. She couldn’t remember what the stranger looked like, or if she had seen him at all. She had been too lost in her own world.

It took two hours to make a report to the police. She knew it wouldn’t achieve much, but at least when her mother asked, she could say she had done it.

It was dark by the time Lana got home. Her scarf was tight around her neck and chin, arms deep in pockets. She was so cold she found herself placing her wireless earphones back in, to shield what little they could from the cold.

Lana waited until the last second to find her keys, reluctantly taking one hand from her pocket and wishing she’d worn gloves.

The keys weren’t in their usual place. She normally placed them in the second pocket inside her bag, so that they wouldn’t jingle.

She continued feeling for them. Maybe she’d left them at work?

Within the second that Lana considered breaking a window, she changed her mind. The front door was unlocked. As she walked inside, Lana tried to remember: did she leave her keys at home, rushing out without locking the door?

But no, Lana remembered fiddling with the key chain at work. Then… she had been in a rush to leave work. She had thrown then into the front pocket of her bag. Next to her phone.

There was a creak down the hall, just barely covered by the sound from her earphones.

“Reconnected”

Upon Reflection

It was not a terribly unusual request for a portrait. A black and white drawing, as realistic as possible: “warts and all” as the client requested.

8pm was a little late to be starting a one-session sketch, but the client offered to pay extra. He was unable to come in working hours due to his work but was willing to stay as late as possible.

I didn’t bother pointing out that it was actually my willingness to stay late that was the issue. Mostly because the money offered had already solved it.

So I sat in my studio at 8pm, sipping a coffee that had been a drinkable temperature an hour ago.

He came precisely on time, the sharp knocks on the door preceded by the sound of commanding steps. He was handsome, which is always disappointing for me. Symmetry and smooth skin were harder to capture. No familiar landmarks to make the drawing more recognisable, no obvious shapes to pluck from his outline. I shook his hand and asked him to take his seat, already lit.

I offered water, which he politely declined. So we began.

An outline, first. As I drew the basic oval and lines, I asked what made him want his portrait. He seemed surprised at the question and tried to speak without moving. I assured him it was part of the process and that he could indeed move around, within reason.

For me, the process has never involved silence and a perfectly still subject. As I memorise the details on a person’s face I need to know how the parts move together: is there a dimple when he smiles? A worn line in the forehead when he frowns? Eyes that glisten too quickly when distressed?

But first we start with the outline.

The client had meant to do this for a while, he told me. An impending birthday was a convenient deadline, so he made the appointment. I asked how soon the deadline was, and was told midnight. I joked that it was a good thing he hadn’t wanted oil paints. I decided not to ask his age. Anyone with akin that clear took pride in their appearance, which usually meant they’d make me guess how old they are.

A little more detail next: features marked in place, but not yet his. Where was he from?

He had lived in this city for years, but he didn’t call it home. He wasn’t sure he ever would. His original home was long gone, developed over, renamed, forgotten. He gave me the name of a town, but I cannot remember the word. German, perhaps, although he had no accent.

I began to bring in more details, confident lines covering grey outlines. Was this portrait for himself, or a gift?

It was for himself. A birthday gift of sorts. He laughed then, and I quickly took in the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, putting them onto the paper. He did not show his teeth when he smiled, I noted. I drew him with a closed mouth, one side raised. It was easy enough to get him in a good mood in conversation, but I needed to concentrate, so I brought out my crowd-pleaser. As the client browsed through the folio of pet portraits I had been commissioned for, I shaded in high cheekbones and ears that came to a slight point.

At the height of his joyful review (a white, fluffy cat in a jacobean ruff) I asked as casually as possible if he wanted any scars left out. He paused, but then nodded. Fortunately I had already captured his expression, as after that he placed the folio down and stared silently at the wall behind me. I shaded in the scars on his neck.

A few more silent minutes and the portrait neared completion. I mentioned that I needed to check something, and reached under the table to grab a hand mirror. The client stood bolt upright, demanding to know what I was doing.

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The Perfect Day

It had been the perfect day.

Her white dress was immaculately pressed and fit perfectly. Her hair and makeup were exactly as she had envisioned. The cars were on time and her bridal party followed their steps precisely as she had instructed.

The groom as well-dressed in the suit she had selected, and he repeated the vows she had chosen. She was proud to be his wife and as they travelled to the reception venue, she thought that everything would go just as smoothly as the ceremony.

Everything went according to plan, right up until the cake cutting. She had told him she would not abide him trying to shove cake into her face. He had told her he understood. He had promised he would not. But in that moment, egged on by relatives, he dabbed it on her nose.

It had been the perfect day until that moment. Ever the perfect bride, she had laughed and excused herself to clean up.

Later that night, in their honeymoon suite, she used strips torn from her once-pristine dress to wipe up the mess. Their honeymoon luggage was now packed full to bursting, its original contents placed in the rubbish bags the concierge had brought up. She hoped that the bags lining the inside of the luggage would not leak. Blood was so hard to clean.

She had been so close this time. She was certain that the next time it would be perfect.

A Good Neighbour

Bill has always been an excellent neighbour. He kept to himself mostly, but he would give you the shirt off his back if he thought it would make you happy.

It was odd, Steve supposed, that he still lived alone. It was a big house, so he must be doing well at his job. Something in finance, Bill would murmur if asked. He was also handsome by any standards, although his smile always seemed a bit forced.

Still, it was surprising when the police came by. They asked Steve if he had noticed any odd behaviour, or if he could recall any large garden projects Bill had been working on. They wouldn’t explain what they were looking for, but Steve had seen enough TV to have a suspicion. He told them that he wasn’t aware of anything.

That afternoon, Steve stared from the kitchen window at the garden shed his friendly neighbour had helped build months back. Bill had insisted on pouring the concrete for the base and was even willing to pay for the supplies, as he “could use the practice for later”. Due to his odd working hours he had worked on it at night, so Steve did not need to help.

The amount of dirt left displaced had seemed a little much, he had thought. Still, it would be a shame to ruin such good work. Plus, Steve had kept the bloodied earring he had found in the dirt pile, just in case Bill wouldn’t agree to help build the pool he was planning.

One Sentence Stories (Part 3)


There was nothing quite so frustrating as getting halfway through digging in one’s own garden and finding that an intended grave was already claimed.


They held hands as they ran, hoping that one of the dismembered digits would unlock the fingerprint-locked doors.


Putting up all these “missing” posters really helped cover how fresh this portion of the wall was, and the glue would help cover the smell.


Guest

“May I have your name?”

The figure in the hut’s doorway smiled politely, but slightly too widely.  The hand holding the door open had too many joints in the fingers.

“No, but I am called Ella”

Ella had been told enough stories about strange beings in the forest to fall for so simple a trick. But she had been caught unaware by the first storm the forest had felt in her lifetime and decided it was worth the risk to get out of the rain.

“Well met, Ella. You may enter. May I have your coat?”

“Only if I may have yours”

The resulting smile did not meet the figure’s eyes. Ella resolved not to ask their name. She did not want to know what they might ask for in exchange.

“I do not believe it would fit you. Or suit your needs”

The being gestured to a coatrack which held a coat made of moss. As Ella looked, a mushroom bloomed upon the shoulder and some small, many-legged shapes skittered across the back.

“You are right, it is best we retain our own coats. May I stay the night here? I will leave once it stops raining”

“Yes. You shall remain until the rain stops”

Ella smiled and shook the outstretched hand. There had been no cost required. All she had to do was mind her words and her manners until it was time to leave.

When she awoke to find it still raining, Ella peered out of the window to see when it might stop. There were no clouds where she could see, yet the rain poured atop the hut’s roof.

The being hummed as they prepared breakfast, loudly placing a kettle atop the stove.

“It may be a while before the kettle boils, my dear guest. Time flows so slowly here”

Ella continued staring, seeing the dark outline of a cloud directly above the hut.

“Why, the last rain only just stopped falling yesterday morning. Who knows how long this one will last?”

Two Sentence Stories (Part 18)


The teleportation experiment had almost been a complete success, with only one pressing issue. As he stared at his copy standing atop the other platform, he realised only one could take the credit.


There are no monsters underneath the bed. It’s too obvious: the best monsters take the place of pillows and blankets.


He had always made the most realistic shadow puppets, each creature coming easily to him. But as he created the outline of a dog to pretend to eat the spider on the wall, he felt a crunch between his fingers.